Update per recommendation

Author: MikeRayMSFT

docs/sql-server/azure-arc/data-collection.md

@@ -12,29 +12,26 @@ ms.custom: references_regions
 
 [!INCLUDE [sqlserver](../../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver.md)]
 
-This article describes the data that Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server transmits to Microsoft. Azure Arc-enabled SQL server collects usage data as described in this article and at [Monitor Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server](sql-monitoring.md).
+This article describes the data that Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] transmits to Microsoft. Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] collects usage data as described in this article and at [Monitor Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)]](sql-monitoring.md).
 
-Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server and any of the related Azure Arc-enabled services don't:
-
-- Collect any personally identifiable information (PII) or end-user identifiable information.
-- Store any customer data.
+Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] does not collect any personally identifiable information (PII) or end-user identifiable information, or store any customer data.
 
 ## Related products
 
-Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server uses the following products:
+Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] uses the following products:
 
 - Azure Arc-enabled servers
 
-The following data is collected for Azure Arc-enabled SQL Servers:
-
 ## Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server
 
+The following data is collected for Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)]:
+
 | Description | Property name | Property type |
 | :-- | :-- | :-- |
 | SQL Server edition | `Edition` | `string` |
 | Resource ID of the hosting Azure Arc for Servers resource | `ContainerResourceId` | `string` |
 | Time when the resource was created | `CreateTime` | string |
-| The number of logical processors used by the SQL Server instance | `VCore` | `string` |
+| The number of logical processors used by the [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] instance | `VCore` | `string` |
 | Cloud connectivity status | `Status` | `string` |
 | SQL Server update level | `PatchLevel` | `string` |
 | SQL Server collation | `Collation` | `string` |
@@ -43,9 +40,9 @@ The following data is collected for Azure Arc-enabled SQL Servers:
 | Dynamic TCP ports used by SQL Server | `TcpDynamicPorts` | `string` |
 | Static TCP ports used by SQL Server | `TcpStaticPorts` | `string` |
 | SQL Server product ID | `ProductId` | `string` |
-| SQL Server provisioning state | `ProvisioningState` | `string` |
+| [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] provisioning state | `ProvisioningState` | `string` |
 
-The following JSON document is an example of the SQL Server - Azure Arc resource.
+The following JSON document is an example of the [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] - Azure Arc resource
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -91,7 +88,7 @@ The following JSON document is an example of the SQL Server - Azure Arc resource
 | Backup information | `backupInformation` | `object` |
 | Provisioning state | `provisioningState` | `string` |
 
-The following JSON document is an example of the SQL Server database - Azure Arc resource.
+The following JSON document is an example of the [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] database - Azure Arc resource.
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -119,6 +116,6 @@ The following JSON document is an example of the SQL Server database - Azure Arc
 
 ## Related content
 
-- [Automatically connect your SQL Server to Azure Arc](automatically-connect.md)
-- [Configure advanced data security for your SQL Server instance](configure-advanced-data-security.md)
-- [Configure best practices assessment on an Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server instance](assess.md)
+- [Automatically connect your [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] to Azure Arc](automatically-connect.md)
+- [Configure advanced data security for your [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] instance](configure-advanced-data-security.md)
+- [Configure best practices assessment on an Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] instance](assess.md)

docs/sql-server/azure-arc/includes/unsupported-configurations.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md
 - [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Failover Cluster Instances (FCI).
 - [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] roles other than the Database Engine, such as Analysis Services (SSAS), Reporting Services (SSRS), or Integration Services (SSIS).
 - [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] editions: Business Intelligence.
-- Private connections between resources with Private Link.
+- Private Link connections to the Azure Arc data processing service at the `san-af--prod.azurewebsites.net` endpoint used for inventory and usage upload.
 - [!INCLUDE [sql2008-md](../../../includes/sql2008-md.md)], [!INCLUDE [sql2008r2-md](../../../includes/sql2008r2-md.md)], and older versions.
 - Installing the Arc agent and [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] extension can't be done as part of sysprep image creation.
 - [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] in Azure Virtual Machines.