Update private link (not) support(ed) - and data collection

Author: MikeRayMSFT

docs/sql-server/azure-arc/data-collection.md

@@ -4,25 +4,28 @@ description: Explains data that Microsoft collects for reporting for Azure Arc-e
 author: anosov1960
 ms.author: sashan
 ms.reviewer: mikeray, randolphwest
-ms.date: 07/06/2023
+ms.date: 10/03/2023
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.custom: references_regions
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 # Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server data collection and reporting
 
 [!INCLUDE [sqlserver](../../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver.md)]
 
-This article describes the data that Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server transmits to Microsoft.
+This article describes the data that Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server transmits to Microsoft. Azure Arc-enabled SQL server collects usage data as described in this article and at [Monitor Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server](sql-monitoring.md).
 
-Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server, and any of the related Azure Arc-enabled services, don't store any customer data.
+Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server and any of the related Azure Arc-enabled services don't:
+
+- Collect any personally identifiable information (PII) or end-user identifiable information.
+- Store any customer data.
 
 ## Related products
 
 Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server uses the following products:
 
 - Azure Arc-enabled servers
 
-The following data is collected to Azure for Azure Arc-enabled SQL Servers:
+The following data is collected for Azure Arc-enabled SQL Servers:
 
 ## Azure Arc-enabled SQL Server
 

docs/sql-server/azure-arc/includes/unsupported-configurations.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
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 author: MikeRayMSFT
 ms.author: mikeray
-ms.date: 09/28/2023
+ms.date: 10/03/2023
 ms.topic: include
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@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@ Azure Arc-enabled [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md
 - [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Failover Cluster Instances (FCI).
 - [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] roles other than the Database Engine, such as Analysis Services (SSAS), Reporting Services (SSRS), or Integration Services (SSIS).
 - [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] editions: Business Intelligence.
+- Private connections between resources with Private Link.
 - [!INCLUDE [sql2008-md](../../../includes/sql2008-md.md)], [!INCLUDE [sql2008r2-md](../../../includes/sql2008r2-md.md)], and older versions.
 - Installing the Arc agent and [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] extension can't be done as part of sysprep image creation.
 - [!INCLUDE [ssnoversion-md](../../../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] in Azure Virtual Machines.