Update ssis-vs2022-troubleshooting-guide.md

Author: WanxuanYe

docs/ssdt/ssis-vs2022-troubleshooting-guide.md

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 Visit https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/SQL-Server-Integration-Services/bg-p/SSIS for the latest information, tips, news, and announcements about SSIS directly from the product team. Integration Services (SSIS) extension release notes are listed on the [extension marketplace](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=SSIS.MicrosoftDataToolsIntegrationServices).
 
 ## Component Download
-- To design packages using Oracle and Teradata connectors and targeting an earlier version of SQL Server prior to SQL 2019, in addition to the [Microsoft Oracle Connector](https://aka.ms/SSISMSOracleConnector) and [Microsoft Teradata Connector](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=100599), you need to also install the corresponding version of Microsoft Connector for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity.
+- To design packages using Oracle and Teradata connectors and targeting an earlier version of SQL Server before SQL 2019, in addition to the [Microsoft Oracle Connector](https://aka.ms/SSISMSOracleConnector) and [Microsoft Teradata Connector](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=100599), you also need to install the corresponding version of Microsoft Connector for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity.
   - [Microsoft Connector Version 5.0 for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity targeting SQL Server 2017](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=55179)
   - [Microsoft Connector Version 4.0 for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity targeting SQL Server 2016](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=52950)
   - [Microsoft Connector Version 3.0 for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity targeting SQL Server 2014](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=44582)
   - [Microsoft Connector Version 2.0 for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity targeting SQL Server 2012](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=29283)
 
-- Since version 3.3, Power Query Source for SQL Server 2017-2022 have been excluded from the installation of this product. To continue using this component, manually download and install them by yourselves. Here are the download links: [Power Query Source for SQL Server 2017-2022](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=100619)
+- Since version 3.3, Power Query Source for SQL Server 2017-2022 is excluded from the installation of this product. To continue using this component, manually download and install them by yourselves. Here are the download links: [Power Query Source for SQL Server 2017-2022](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=100619)
 
 ## Common Issues
 - SSIS Execute Package Task doesn't support debugging when ExecuteOutOfProcess is set to True.
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 - [!INCLUDE[snac-removed-oledb-and-odbc](../includes/snac-removed-oledb-and-odbc.md)]
 
-- If Oracle, Teradata, or other OOB component is not found after upgrading SSDT, please make sure that the connector for latest SQL Server version is installed.
+- If Oracle, Teradata, or other OOB component is not found after upgrading SSDT, make sure that the connector for latest SQL Server version is installed.
 
 ## Known issues
 More detail in [Release Note](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=SSIS.MicrosoftDataToolsIntegrationServices).
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 If SSIS installation shows Setup Failed with "Unknown error(0x80131500)" or "ISVsix Unknown error". Open %temp%\SsdtisSetup folder, search in Microsoft.DataTools.IntegrationServices_{latestTimestamp}_ISVsix.log:
 - The error is "Pre-check verification failed with warning(s) :  AnotherInstallationRunning.",
-  1. Keep waiting and retry.  More detail: You are blocked by a Windows Installer.  which is a subservice of Windows that manages the installation of packages like MSIs,  Windows Update or a 3rd party things. And it can only handle one thing at a time.  
+  1. Keep waiting and retry. More detail: Windows Installer block your installation. Windows Installer is a subservice of Windows that manages the installation of packages like MSIs,  Windows Update or a 3rd party things, and it can only handle one thing at a time.
 
 - The error is "The file {filefullpath} already exists.":
    1. Run the following commands from an elevated command prompt: