Update ssis-vs2019-troubleshooting-guide.md

Author: WanxuanYe

docs/ssdt/ssis-vs2019-troubleshooting-guide.md

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 Visit https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/SQL-Server-Integration-Services/bg-p/SSIS for the latest information, tips, news, and announcements about SSIS directly from the product team.  Integration Services (SSIS) extension release notes are listed on the [extension marketplace](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=SSIS.SqlServerIntegrationServicesProjects).
 
 ## Component download
-- To design packages using Oracle and Teradata connectors and targeting an earlier version of SQL Server prior to SQL Server 2019, in addition to the [Microsoft Oracle Connector](https://aka.ms/SSISMSOracleConnector) and [Microsoft Teradata Connector](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=100599), you need to also install the corresponding version of Microsoft Connector for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity.
+- To design packages using Oracle and Teradata connectors and targeting an earlier version of SQL Server before SQL Server 2019, in addition to the [Microsoft Oracle Connector](https://aka.ms/SSISMSOracleConnector) and [Microsoft Teradata Connector](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=100599), you need also to install the corresponding version of Microsoft Connector for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity.
   - [Microsoft Connector Version 5.0 for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity targeting SQL Server 2017](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=55179)
   - [Microsoft Connector Version 4.0 for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity targeting SQL Server 2016](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=52950)
   - [Microsoft Connector Version 3.0 for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity targeting SQL Server 2014](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=44582)
   - [Microsoft Connector Version 2.0 for Oracle and Teradata by Attunity targeting SQL Server 2012](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=29283)
 
-- Since version 3.3, Power Query Source for SQL Server 2017-2022 have been excluded from the installation of this product. To continue using this component, manually download and install them by yourselves. Here are the download links: [Power Query Source for SQL Server 2017-2022](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=100619)
+- Since version 3.3, Power Query Source for SQL Server 2017-2022 is excluded from the installation of this product. To continue using this component, manually download and install them by yourselves. Here are the download links: [Power Query Source for SQL Server 2017-2022](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=100619)
 
 ## Common issues
 - SSIS Execute Package Task doesn't support debugging when ExecuteOutOfProcess is set to True.
 
-- This extension doesn't support Visual Studio 2022. Please use [SQL Server Integration Services Projects extension 2022](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=SSIS.MicrosoftDataToolsIntegrationServices). 
+- This extension doesn't support Visual Studio 2022. Use [SQL Server Integration Services Projects extension 2022](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=SSIS.MicrosoftDataToolsIntegrationServices). 
 
-- Sometimes this product or Visual Studio Tools for Applications 2019 may be somehow deleted during VS instance upgrade. If your existing SSIS projects cannot be loaded, try to repair this product via control panel. If VS doesn't pop up when clicking on "Edit Script", try to repair VSTA 2019 via control panel. We've reported this issue to VS team. Sorry for any inconvenience.
+- Sometimes this product or Visual Studio Tools for Applications 2019 may be somehow deleted during VS instance upgrade. If your existing SSIS projects cannot be loaded, try to repair this product via control panel. If VS doesn't pop up when clicking on "Edit Script", try to repair VSTA 2019 via control panel.
 
 - [!INCLUDE[snac-removed-oledb-and-odbc](../includes/snac-removed-oledb-and-odbc.md)]
 
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 If SSIS installation shows Setup Failed with "Unknown error(0x80131500)" or "ISVsix Unknown error". Open %temp%\SsdtisSetup folder, search in Microsoft.DataTools.IntegrationServices_{latestTimestamp}_ISVsix.log:
 - The error is "Pre-check verification failed with warning(s) :  AnotherInstallationRunning.",
-  1. Keep waiting and retry.  More detail: You are blocked by a Windows Installer.  which is a subservice of Windows that manages the installation of packages like MSIs,  Windows Update or a 3rd party things. And it can only handle one thing at a time.  
+  1. Keep waiting and retry.  More detail: Windows Installer block your installation. Windows Installer is a subservice of Windows that manages the installation of packages like MSIs,  Windows Update or a 3rd party things, and it can only handle one thing at a time.  
 
 - The error is "The file {filefullpath} already exists.":
    1. Run the following commands from an elevated command prompt:
@@ -79,4 +79,4 @@ Follow the below steps to install this product in an offline environment:
 
 1. Launch the installer of this product and perform the installation, or you can run the installer in quiet mode. Launch the installer with "/?" argument to get more details of the arguments list of the installer.
 
-1. VS Community does not support offline activation. To use this product with VS Community, you must log in to your Microsoft account occasionally in VS Community. If you want to use this product in a totally offline environment, we recommend you to install this product on VS Professional or Enterprise, which support offline activation via a product key.
+1. VS Community does not support offline activation. To use this product with VS Community, you must log in to your Microsoft account occasionally in VS Community. If you want to use this product in an offline environment, we recommend you to install this product on VS Professional or Enterprise, which support offline activation via a product key.