Data privacy | a few more tweaks

Author: markingmyname

docs/azure-data-studio/usage-data-collection.md

@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ description: This article explains how to control if usage and crash reporting d
 ms.prod: azure-data-studio
 ms.technology: azure-data-studio
 ms.topic: how-to
-author: "markingmyname"
-ms.author: "maghan"
-ms.reviewer: "wopeter"
+author: alayu
+ms.author: yualan
+ms.reviewer: wopeter
 ms.custom: seo-lt-2019
 ms.date: 05/06/2021
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@@ -17,8 +17,6 @@ Azure Data Studio contains Internet-enabled features that can collect and send a
 
 Azure Data Studio may collect standard computer, use, and performance information that may be transmitted to Microsoft and analyzed to improve the quality, security, and reliability of Azure Data Studio.
 
-Azure Data Studio doesn't collect your name, address, or other data related to an identified or identifiable individual.
-
 For details, see the [Microsoft Privacy Statement](https://privacy.microsoft.com/privacystatement), and [SQL Server Privacy supplement](../sql-server/sql-server-privacy.md).
 
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@@ -79,8 +77,6 @@ Several updates made to Azure Data Studio to help ensure data privacy.
 - Reviewing and classifying the telemetry that we send.
 - Ensuring that we have valid data retention policies in place for any data we collect, for example, crash dumps.
 
-We expect people to ask to see the data we collect. However, Azure Data Studio doesn't have a way to collect personal data as Azure Data Studio doesn't have a *sign-in* experience that uniquely identifies a user. We send information that helps us approximate a single user for diagnostic purposes (this is based on a hash of the network adapter NIC), but this isn't guaranteed to be unique.  For example, virtual machines (VMs) often rotate NIC IDs or allocate from a pool. This technique is sufficient to help us when working through problems, but it's not reliable enough for us to *provide your data*.
-
 ## More resources
 
 - [Workspace and User settings](settings.md)

docs/sql-server/sql-server-privacy.md

@@ -24,9 +24,9 @@ Refer to the [Microsoft Privacy Statement](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?Link
 The data classification in this article only applies to versions of the SQL Server on-premises product.
 
 It doesn't apply to the items listed below:
+- [Azure Data Studio](../azure-data-studio/usage-data-collection.md)
 - [SQL Server Management Studio (SSMS)](../ssms/sql-server-management-studio-telemetry-ssms.md)
 - [SQL Server Data Tools (SSDT)](../ssdt/anonymous-usage-data.md)
-- [Azure Data Studio](../azure-data-studio/usage-data-collection.md)
 - [Database Migration Assistant (DMA)](../dma/dma-diagnostic-data-collection.md)
 - [SQL Server Migration Assistant (SSMA)](../ssma/ssma-diagnostic-data-collection.md)