[ADS] Revised GDPR section to remove it

Author: markingmyname

docs/azure-data-studio/usage-data-collection.md

@@ -71,23 +71,20 @@ If you don't want to send, crash data to Microsoft, you can change the `enable-c
 
 Azure Data Studio lets you add features to the product by installing Microsoft and third-party extensions. These extensions may be collecting their own usage data and are not controlled by the `telemetry.enableTelemetry` setting. Consult the specific extension's documentation to learn about its telemetry reporting and whether it can be disabled.
 
-## GDPR and Azure Data Studio
+## Data privacy
 
-In addition to supporting the General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR), the Azure Data Studio team takes privacy seriously. That's both for Microsoft as a company and specifically within the Azure Data Studio team.
+The Azure Data Studio team takes privacy seriously. That's both for Microsoft as a company and specifically within the Azure Data Studio team.
 
-To ensure GDPR compliance, we made several updates to Azure Data Studio.
+Several updates to Azure Data Studio to help ensure data privacy.
 
 - Making it more accessible to opt-out of telemetry collection by placing a notification in the product for all existing and new users.
 - Reviewing and classifying the telemetry that we send.
 - Ensuring that we have valid data retention policies in place for any data we collect, for example, crash dumps.
 
-In short, we've worked hard to do the right thing for all users, as these practices apply to all geographies, not just Europe.
-
-One question we expect people to ask is to see the data we collect. However, we don't have a reliable way to do this as Azure Data Studio doesn't have a *sign-in* experience that uniquely identifies a user. We send information that helps us approximate a single user for diagnostic purposes (this is based on a hash of the network adapter NIC), but this isn't guaranteed to be unique.  For example, virtual machines (VMs) often rotate NIC IDs or allocate from a pool. This technique is sufficient to help us when working through problems, but it's not reliable enough for us to 'provide your data'.
-
-For general information about GDPR, see the [GDPR section of the Service Trust portal](https://servicetrust.microsoft.com/ViewPage/GDPRGetStarted).
+We expect people to ask to see the data we collect. However, Azure Data Studio doesn't have a way to collect personal data as Azure Data Studio doesn't have a *sign-in* experience that uniquely identifies a user. We send information that helps us approximate a single user for diagnostic purposes (this is based on a hash of the network adapter NIC), but this isn't guaranteed to be unique.  For example, virtual machines (VMs) often rotate NIC IDs or allocate from a pool. This technique is sufficient to help us when working through problems, but it's not reliable enough for us to *provide your data*.
 
 ## More resources
+
 - [Workspace and User settings](settings.md)
 - [GDPR section of the Service Trust portal](https://servicetrust.microsoft.com/ViewPage/GDPRGetStarted)
 - [GDPR section of the Microsoft Trust Center](https://www.microsoft.com/trust-center/privacy/gdpr-overview?rtc=1) 

docs/includes/gdpr-hybrid-note.md

@@ -12,5 +12,5 @@ ms.author: lizross
 ms.custom: include file
 ---
 
->[!Note]
->If you're interested in viewing or deleting personal data, please review Microsoft's guidance in the [Windows Data Subject Requests for the GDPR](/microsoft-365/compliance/gdpr-data-subject-requests) site. If you're looking for general information about GDPR, see the [GDPR section of the Service Trust portal](https://servicetrust.microsoft.com/ViewPage/GDPRGetStarted).
+> [!Note]
+> If you're interested in viewing or deleting personal data, please review Microsoft's guidance in the [Windows Data Subject Requests for the GDPR](/microsoft-365/compliance/gdpr-data-subject-requests) site. If you're looking for general information about GDPR, see the [GDPR section of the Service Trust portal](https://servicetrust.microsoft.com/ViewPage/GDPRGetStarted).

docs/includes/gdpr-related-guidance.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: include
 ms.author: maghan
 author: markingmyname
 ms.custom:
-ms.date: 05/05/2021
+ms.date: 05/05/2021 
 ---
 
 This article provides steps about how to delete personal data from the device or service and can be used to support your obligations under the GDPR. For general information about GDPR, see the [GDPR section of the Microsoft Trust Center](https://www.microsoft.com/trust-center/privacy/gdpr-overview?rtc=1) and the [GDPR section of the Service Trust portal](https://servicetrust.microsoft.com/ViewPage/GDPRGetStarted).