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Author: stevestein

docs/sql-operations-studio/what-is.md

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 title: What is SQL Operations Studio (preview)? | Microsoft Docs
-description: SQL Operations Studio (preview) is a free, light-weight tool for modern database operations for SQL Server, Azure SQL Database and Azure SQL Data Warehouse. SQL Operations Studio (preview) runs on Windows, Mac, and Linux. 
+description: SQL Operations Studio (preview) is a free, light-weight tool, that runs on Windows, macOS, and Linux, for managing SQL Server, Azure SQL Database, and Azure SQL Data Warehouse; wherever they're running. 
 ms.custom: "tools|sos"
 ms.date: "11/15/2017"
 ms.prod: "sql-non-specified"
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ ms.workload: "Inactive"
 
 # What is [!INCLUDE[name-sos](../includes/name-sos.md)]?
 
-[!INCLUDE[name-sos](../includes/name-sos-short.md)] is a free, light-weight tool, that runs on Windows, macOS, and Linux, for managing SQL Server, Azure SQL Database, and Azure SQL Data Warehouse, wherever they're running; Windows, Linux, Azure, VMs, AWS, Google cloud, containers, etc. 
+[!INCLUDE[name-sos](../includes/name-sos-short.md)] is a free, light-weight tool, that runs on Windows, macOS, and Linux, for managing SQL Server, Azure SQL Database, and Azure SQL Data Warehouse; wherever they're running.
 
 **[Download and Install [!INCLUDE[name-sos](../includes/name-sos-short.md)]](download.md)**