Update release-notes-reporting-services.md

Acrolinx fixes

Author: Jill Grant

docs/reporting-services/release-notes-reporting-services.md

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ Fixed slowness of Large MDX Query as an Expression.
 ## 16.0.8361.39598, 2022/11/23
 *(Product Version: 16.0.1113.11)*
 
--  Fixed issue where some SQL Server 2022 product keys were not working with SQL Server 2022 Reporting Services.
+-  Fixed issue where some SQL Server 2022 product keys weren't working with SQL Server 2022 Reporting Services.
 
 ## 16.0.8353.8096, 2022/11/16
 *(Product Version: 16.0.1112.48)*
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ The following issue has been fixed:
 | :---------- | :------ |
 | Textbox inside Rectangle causes the rectangle to not grow vertically when rc:Toolbar=False and it has long text. |   |
 | Text size isn't scaling if pageHeight is less than 0.5 inch. |   |
-| Deadlock occurs in the SSRS catalog database when it is used with CRM. |   |
+| Deadlock occurs in the SSRS catalog database when it's used with CRM. |   |
 | Vertically aligned column headers displayed incorrectly when scrolling down in report. |   |
 | Users added to System Center Operations Manager Reporting Role have access blocked to SSRS web portal. |   |
 | Thai character isn't exported correctly into the PDF. |   |
@@ -326,9 +326,9 @@ The following issue has been fixed:
 
 | Fixed issue | Details |
 | :---------- | :------ |
-| Data Driven Subscription page doesn't show the Delivery Option once it is created. |   |
+| Data Driven Subscription page doesn't show the Delivery Option once it's created. |   |
 | Upgrading SSRS 2012 to SSRS 2017 results in RSManagement throwing an exception every few seconds. |   |
-| Cannot change defaults values for multi-value parameters in IE11. |   |
+| Can't change defaults values for multi-value parameters in IE11. |   |
 | Schedules are empty whenever shared schedule is executed. |   |
 
 ## 14.0.600.689, 2018/02/28