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garyericson · garyericson · commit 21d8658c5e43 · 2020-07-10T13:58:22.000-07:00
diff --git a/docs/machine-learning/common-issues-external-script-execution.md b/docs/machine-learning/common-issues-external-script-execution.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
-title: Common issues with Launchpad
+title: Troubleshooting issues with Launchpad service
 description: This article provides troubleshooting guidance for many issues that prevent the SQL Server Trusted Launchpad service from starting, including configuration problems or changes, or missing network protocols.
 ms.prod: sql
 ms.technology: machine-learning-services
@@ -10,12 +10,12 @@ ms.author: davidph
 ms.custom: seo-lt-2019
 monikerRange: ">=sql-server-2016||>=sql-server-linux-ver15||=sqlallproducts-allversions"
 ---
-# Common issues with Launchpad service and external script execution in SQL Server
+# Troubleshooting issues with Launchpad service and external script execution in SQL Server
 [!INCLUDE[appliesto-ss-xxxx-xxxx-xxx-md](../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver.md)]
 
-SQL Server Trusted Launchpad service supports external script execution for R and Python. 
+This article provides troubleshooting guidance for issues involving the SQL Server Trusted Launchpad service. The Launchpad service supports external script execution for R and Python. Multiple issues can prevent Launchpad from starting, including configuration problems or changes, or missing network protocols.  
 
-Multiple issues can prevent Launchpad from starting, including configuration problems or changes, or missing network protocols. This article provides troubleshooting guidance for many issues. For any we missed, you can post questions to the [Machine Learning Server forum](https://social.msdn.microsoft.com/Forums/home?category=MicrosoftR).
+If you encounter issues not covered here, you can post questions to the [Machine Learning Server forum](https://social.msdn.microsoft.com/Forums/home?category=MicrosoftR).
 
 ## Determine whether Launchpad is running
 
diff --git a/docs/machine-learning/data-collection-ml-troubleshooting-process.md b/docs/machine-learning/data-collection-ml-troubleshooting-process.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Troubleshoot data collection
-description: Learn data collection methods you should use when attempting to resolve problems on your own or with the help of Microsoft customer support.
+title: Collect data for troubleshooting SQL machine learning
+description: Learn how to collect the data you need when attempting to resolve problems on your own or with the help of Microsoft customer support.
 ms.prod: sql
 ms.technology: machine-learning-services
 
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@ ms.author: davidph
 ms.custom: seo-lt-2019
 monikerRange: ">=sql-server-2016||>=sql-server-linux-ver15||=sqlallproducts-allversions"
 ---
-# Troubleshoot data collection for machine learning
+# Collect data to troubleshoot SQL machine learning
 
 [!INCLUDE[appliesto-ss-xxxx-xxxx-xxx-md](../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver.md)]
 
-This article describes data collection methods you should use when attempting to resolve problems on your own or with the help of Microsoft customer support.
+This article describes how to collect the data you need when you're attempting to resolve problems in SQL machine learning. This data can be useful whether you're resolving problems on your own or with the help of Microsoft customer support.
 
 ## SQL Server version and edition
 
diff --git a/docs/machine-learning/machine-learning-troubleshooting-faq.md b/docs/machine-learning/machine-learning-troubleshooting-faq.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Troubleshooting
-description: Provides a starting point for working through known issues.
+title: Troubleshoot machine learning in SQL Server
+description: Provides a starting point for working through issues in SQL machine learning.
 ms.prod: sql
 ms.technology: machine-learning-services
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ monikerRange: ">=sql-server-2016||>=sql-server-linux-ver15||=sqlallproducts-allv
 # Troubleshoot machine learning in SQL Server
 [!INCLUDE[appliesto-ss-xxxx-xxxx-xxx-md](../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver.md)]
 
-Use this article as a starting point for working through known issues.
+Use this article as a starting point for troubleshooting issues you encounter when using SQL Server machine learning.
 
 ## Known issues
 
@@ -24,6 +24,7 @@ The following articles describe known issues with the current and previous relea
 + [Known issues for R Services](../machine-learning/known-issues-for-sql-server-machine-learning-services.md)
 + [SQL Server 2016 release notes](../sql-server/sql-server-2016-release-notes.md)
 + [SQL Server 2017 release notes](../sql-server/sql-server-2017-release-notes.md)
++ [SQL Server 2019 release notes](../sql-server/sql-server-version-15-release-notes.md)
 
 ## How to gather system information
 
@@ -42,7 +43,7 @@ Start here if you have not set up machine learning with SQL Server, or if you wa
 
 ### Configuration
 
-The following articles contain information about defaults, and how to customize the configuration for machine learning on an instance:
+The following articles contain information about defaults, and how to customize the configuration for machine learning on a SQL instance:
 
 + [Scale concurrent execution of external scripts in SQL Server Machine Learning Services](administration/scale-concurrent-execution-external-scripts.md)   
 + [How to create a resource pool](administration/create-external-resource-pool.md)
diff --git a/docs/machine-learning/r-script-execution-errors.md b/docs/machine-learning/r-script-execution-errors.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Troubleshooting R scripts
-description: This article documents several scripting errors when running R code in SQL Server.
+title: Common R scripting errors
+description: This article documents several common scripting errors you might encounter when running R code in SQL Server.
 ms.prod: sql
 ms.technology: machine-learning-services
 
@@ -11,10 +11,12 @@ ms.author: davidph
 ms.custom: seo-lt-2019
 monikerRange: ">=sql-server-2016||>=sql-server-linux-ver15||=sqlallproducts-allversions"
 ---
-# R scripting errors in SQL Server
+# Common R scripting errors in SQL Server
 [!INCLUDE[appliesto-ss-xxxx-xxxx-xxx-md](../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver.md)]
 
-This article documents several scripting errors when running R code in SQL Server. The list is not comprehensive. There are many packages, and errors can vary between versions of the same package. We recommend posting script errors on the [Machine Learning Server forum](https://social.msdn.microsoft.com/Forums/home?category=MicrosoftR), which supports the machine learning components used in R Services (In-Database), Microsoft R Client, and Microsoft R Server.
+This article documents several common scripting errors when running R code in SQL Server. The list is not comprehensive. There are many packages, and errors can vary between versions of the same package. 
+
+If you encounter script errors not covered here, post them on the [Machine Learning Server forum](https://social.msdn.microsoft.com/Forums/home?category=MicrosoftR). This forum supports the machine learning components used in various SQL machine learning products.
 
 ## Valid script fails in T-SQL or in stored procedures
 
diff --git a/docs/machine-learning/r/upgrade-and-installation-faq-sql-server-r-services.md b/docs/machine-learning/r/upgrade-and-installation-faq-sql-server-r-services.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Upgrade and installation FAQ
-description: Answers to some common questions about installation of machine learning features in SQL Server.
+title: Installation and upgrade FAQ
+description: Answers to some common questions about installing or upgrading machine learning features in SQL Server.
 ms.prod: sql
 ms.technology: machine-learning-services
   
@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@ author: dphansen
 ms.custom: seo-lt-2019
 monikerRange: ">=sql-server-2016||>=sql-server-linux-ver15||=sqlallproducts-allversions"
 ---
-# Upgrade and installation FAQ for SQL Server Machine Learning or R Server
+# Installation and upgrade FAQ for SQL Server machine learning or R Server
  [!INCLUDE [SQL Server](../../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver.md)]
 
-This topic provides answers to some common questions about installation of machine learning features in SQL Server. It also covers common questions about upgrades.
+This article provides answers to some common questions about installing machine learning features in SQL Server. It also covers common questions about upgrades.
 
 + Some problems occur only with upgrades from pre-release versions. Therefore, we recommend that you identify your version and edition first before reading these notes. To get version information, run `@@VERSION` in a query from SQL Server Management Studio.
 + Upgrade to the most current release or service release as soon as possible to resolve any issues that were fixed in recent releases.
diff --git a/docs/machine-learning/toc.yml b/docs/machine-learning/toc.yml
@@ -369,11 +369,11 @@
       href: ../machine-learning/machine-learning-troubleshooting-faq.md
     - name: Known issues
       href: ../machine-learning/known-issues-for-sql-server-machine-learning-services.md
-    - name: Data collection
+    - name: Collect data for troubleshooting
       href: ../machine-learning/data-collection-ml-troubleshooting-process.md
-    - name: Install and upgrade errors
+    - name: Installation and upgrade FAQ
       href: ../machine-learning/r/upgrade-and-installation-faq-sql-server-r-services.md
     - name: Launchpad and external script execution errors
       href: ../machine-learning/common-issues-external-script-execution.md
-    - name: R scripting errors
+    - name: Common R scripting errors
       href: ../machine-learning/r-script-execution-errors.md
