A few edits

Author: MikeRayMSFT

docs/big-data-cluster/deploy-openshift.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 title: Deploy on OpenShift
 titleSuffix: SQL Server Big Data Cluster
-description: Learn how to upgrade SQL Server Big Data Clusters on OpenShift .
+description: Learn how to upgrade SQL Server Big Data Clusters on OpenShift.
 author: mihaelablendea
 ms.author: mihaelab
 ms.reviewer: mikeray
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ This article outlines deployment steps that are specific to the OpenShift platfo
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > Below pre-requisites must be performed by a OpenShift cluster admin (cluster-admin cluster role) that has sufficient permissions to create these cluster level objects. For more information on cluster roles in OpenShift see [Using RBAC to define and apply permissions](https://docs.openshift.com/container-platform/4.4/authentication/using-rbac.html).
 
-1. Ensure the `pidsLimit` setting on the OpenShift is updated to accommodate SQL Server workloads. The default value in OpenShift is too low for production like workloads. We recommend a value of at least `4096`, but the optimal value will depend of the `max worker threads` setting in SQL Server and the number of CPU processors on the OpenShift host node. 
+1. Ensure the `pidsLimit` setting on the OpenShift is updated to accommodate SQL Server workloads. The default value in OpenShift is too low for production like workloads. Start with at least `4096`, but the optimal value depends the `max worker threads` setting in SQL Server and the number of CPU processors on the OpenShift host node. 
     - To find out how to update `pidsLimit` for your OpenShift cluster use [these instructions]( https://github.com/openshift/machine-config-operator/blob/master/docs/ContainerRuntimeConfigDesign.md). Note that OpenShift versions before `4.3.5` had a defect causing the updated value to not take effect. Make sure you upgrade OpenShift to the latest version. 
     - To help you compute the optimal value depending on your environment and planned SQL Server workloads, you can use the estimation and examples below:
 
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ This article outlines deployment steps that are specific to the OpenShift platfo
    azdata bdc config init --source openshift-dev-test --target custom-openshift
    ```
 
-   For a deployment on ARO, we recommend to start with one of the `aro-` profiles, that includes default values for `serviceType` and `storageClass` appropriate for this environment. For example:
+   For a deployment on ARO, start with one of the `aro-` profiles, that includes default values for `serviceType` and `storageClass` appropriate for this environment. For example:
 
    ```console
    azdata bdc config init --source aro-dev-test --target custom-openshift